When he left: clean-shaven, corduroy jacket. After eight months, he moved back bearded, always wearing sunglasses. He never leaves his room.
Great imagery – pulls the reader right into the moment. And truly sad, especially when we realize how often this actually happens.
Leaves you wondering what happened in those short eight months. And whether you can truly get them out the door permanently!
The punch line lacked a hint of what happened. Still a very good story.