A story from Friday, July 29, 2011

What Happened With Craig

When he left: clean-shaven, corduroy jacket. After eight months, he moved back bearded, always wearing sunglasses. He never leaves his room.

3 Critiques to "What Happened With Craig"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on July 29, 2011

    Great imagery – pulls the reader right into the moment. And truly sad, especially when we realize how often this actually happens.

  2. The following was written by Sam Webb on July 29, 2011

    Leaves you wondering what happened in those short eight months. And whether you can truly get them out the door permanently!

  3. The following was written by Pauline on August 2, 2011

    The punch line lacked a hint of what happened. Still a very good story.