7 Critiques to "Second War of the Worlds"

1. Old Kitty's critique:

   It certainly pays to get proper vaccination when travelling! Well done Simon!!! Take care
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   This critique was added on May 20, 2011 at 5:01 pm

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2. Joe Romel's critique:

   Haha! Awesome.

   This critique was added on May 20, 2011 at 7:02 pm

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3. Amy Tripp's critique:

   Darn those Martians for being such quick learners. A fun read!

   This critique was added on May 20, 2011 at 9:28 pm

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4. debs's critique:

   So funny. Well done, Simon.

   This critique was added on May 21, 2011 at 5:46 pm

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5. Gayle Beveridge's critique:

   Very funny, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

   This critique was added on May 21, 2011 at 9:41 pm

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6. Milo James Fowler's critique:

   Glad they learned from their mistakes! A lesson for us all.

   This critique was added on May 22, 2011 at 3:30 pm

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7. Fritz Heinzen's critique:

   Uh, oh. Where are Orson Welles and John Houseman when you need them.

   And Dr. Clayton Forrestor (aka Gene Barry) would not be surprised at this turn of events!

   This critique was added on May 26, 2011 at 1:00 pm

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