He wasn’t supposed to take a five year old to the bar. “Damned cute!” Coins dropped to the floor for me to grab. I tattled when we got home.
I can smell the peanuts and hear the rasp of a bar stool scooting over the beery laughter– awesome job, Ames!
Oh, I love this. The title adds a zing!
Instant scene setting, characters both identifiable by their ‘flaws’ and a full story arc. What more could you ask for? Super-duper stuff Amy!!
Jules, Thanks so much for reading and commenting. You’ve awesome.
Maya, Thank you!! I’m so glad you enjoyed this.
Rose, Thanks so much! I really appreciate you reading and commenting on this!
This is lovely. I’ll bet a lot of people will be able to relate to it! It’s amazing how you create such a strong atmosphere and show the kind of relationship in so few words.