A story from Tuesday, June 28, 2011

Planting Plans

Setting aside her letter from the hospital, Helen turned to gaze out over her garden. Well. No point planting those biennials now.

7 Critiques to "Planting Plans"

  1. The following was written by John Tucker on June 28, 2011

    Hard hitting story without saying much. Excellent. Sobering.

  2. The following was written by Amy Tripp on June 28, 2011

    Oh! That last line is a punch in the gut. Well done!

  3. The following was written by Old Kitty on June 28, 2011

    No!! Never give up! Never surrender!! Hospitals get things wrong sometimes!! Oh dear! Fab story though, thank you. Take care
    x

  4. The following was written by Milo James Fowler on June 28, 2011

    Annuals it is, then. Or some kind of bulb? Nice work, Simon.

  5. The following was written by Deborah Walker on June 29, 2011

    A small story with a big impact.

  6. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on June 29, 2011

    A powerful story.

  7. The following was written by Aaron Rudolph on July 13, 2011

    Great reveal. Strong and memorable.