7 Critiques to "Planting Plans"

1. John Tucker's critique:

   Hard hitting story without saying much. Excellent. Sobering.

   This critique was added on June 28, 2011 at 12:00 pm

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2. Amy Tripp's critique:

   Oh! That last line is a punch in the gut. Well done!

   This critique was added on June 28, 2011 at 3:21 pm

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3. Old Kitty's critique:

   No!! Never give up! Never surrender!! Hospitals get things wrong sometimes!! Oh dear! Fab story though, thank you. Take care
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   This critique was added on June 28, 2011 at 5:19 pm

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4. Milo James Fowler's critique:

   Annuals it is, then. Or some kind of bulb? Nice work, Simon.

   This critique was added on June 28, 2011 at 7:12 pm

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5. Deborah Walker's critique:

   A small story with a big impact.

   This critique was added on June 29, 2011 at 2:59 am

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6. Gayle Beveridge's critique:

   A powerful story.

   This critique was added on June 29, 2011 at 8:46 am

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7. Aaron Rudolph's critique:

   Great reveal. Strong and memorable.

   This critique was added on July 13, 2011 at 4:01 am

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