A story from Tuesday, July 27, 2010

Memories and Mortgages

Jane thrust her bare toes into the late summer storm, dripping in curtains just past the porch. They lost the house, but still had the rain.

3 Critiques to "Memories and Mortgages"

  1. The following was written by Danny Pelletier on July 27, 2010

    Love, love this one.

  2. The following was written by Stephen V. Ramey on July 27, 2010

    Very nice. Evocative.

  3. The following was written by K Bladel on July 28, 2010

    Best one of these I’ve seen here. I wasn’t sure if you could really tell a story in such a short amount of space but this does it – there’s a present, an implied past, and hope for the future.

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