A story from Monday, January 14, 2013

Impact Sight

He texted her; she texted him back. At dinner, they sat eating in a magnificent desolation, two satellites trading light.

4 Critiques to "Impact Sight"

  1. The following was written by Phil Hu on January 16, 2013

    Fantastic! Great imagery. Like a little mini-poem…

  2. The following was written by Jan Brown on January 18, 2013

    Lovely writing, wonderful imagery. Also reminds me of two people who communicate so well electronically, but in real life–not so much!

  3. The following was written by Ian Russell on January 31, 2013

    Interesting. I didn’t realize you were describing satellites until I finished reading.

  4. The following was written by Christopher ywoskus on January 31, 2013

    This is a true statement to how people are specifically now adays. To much technology instead of verbal and physical communication. The world would be much different if people focused on what’s in front of them physically rather than technologically