Drink Problem

Max drained the day’s second bottle of Cabernet into his glass. He tried to ignore the nagging thought he was turning into his own father.

4 Critiques to "Drink Problem"

  1. Becky's critique:

    The second bottle. Well, he won’t be his father for very long. Very deep and sad and insightful….

  2. Old Kitty's critique:

    A profoundly poignant story in so little words. Wonderful!

    Take care
    x

  3. Gayle Beveridge's critique:

    A world of psychological insight in two tiny sentences.

  4. Milo James Fowler's critique:

    Poignant, sir, and somehow universal.

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