A story from Thursday, February 28, 2013

Downcast

Kiss me. If only the words were her own. Lips about to meet, she moved away, smiling graciously. Applause. His heart sank. The curtain fell.

2 Critiques to "Downcast"

  1. The following was written by shobha gk on March 2, 2013

    Cryptic, moving and so –o–o real!

  2. The following was written by piya on March 4, 2013

    Thank you so much for dropping by. :)