A story from Friday, August 20, 2010

Dirty Laundry

Her laundry line is a litany. Blouse, button-ripped. Skirt, stubborn-stained. Underwear for the affairs. They rustle in the wind like rumor.

5 Critiques to "Dirty Laundry"

  1. The following was written by dana on August 20, 2010

    LOVE the last line! I can hear the rumors on the breeze now.

  2. The following was written by Danny Pelletier on August 20, 2010

    This one is great.

  3. The following was written by Sharanya on August 23, 2010

    Thank you for reading and for your kind comments. I appreciate it!

  4. The following was written by Suzanne Lilly on August 25, 2010

    It’s word art, the way you tie the clothes, the wind, and the rumors of a woman all into this story! I love it, and I tweeted it to my friends.

  5. The following was written by Rumjhum BIswas on August 30, 2010

    Each lines resonates. Very strong story. I loved it Sharanya.