A story from Wednesday, January 5, 2011

Concrete Steps

You scream and kick your tiny, filthy feet. “I love you,” I whisper as I lay you down on concrete steps. You will drink warm milk tonight.

4 Critiques to "Concrete Steps"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on January 6, 2011

    So much sadness and tragedy wrapped up in one small bundle.

  2. The following was written by dana on January 7, 2011

    Such love wrapped up in this sad story.

  3. The following was written by Lisa Tang Liu on January 7, 2011

    Thank you!

  4. The following was written by Lisa Tang Liu on January 12, 2011

    Hmm… not sure why my last comment didn’t show up… Thank you for your comments!