A story from Thursday, May 17, 2012

Class Trip

The river surges, gulps down the sinking ferry. Ann’s students claw at her. She drowns in their terror before being swallowed by the sea.

5 Critiques to "Class Trip"

  1. The following was written by Milo James Fowler on May 17, 2012

    …and this is why I would NEVER take my class on the Maid of the Mist! A frightfully good one, Madeline.

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on May 17, 2012

    The imagery in this story is superb.

  3. The following was written by Steve B on May 18, 2012

    Wow! Vivid and creepy.

  4. The following was written by Stacy Post on May 20, 2012

    What a way to go! Creepy good, Madeline. You’re in the zone!

  5. The following was written by Lindsey McLeod on May 28, 2012

    Loved this one – excellent twist for something so short and direct.