A story from Thursday, September 15, 2011

Brushstrokes

A thief, madam? No, you misinterpret. I am an artist. Here are your purse, your keys. The look on your face, my lady, is my masterpiece.

4 Critiques to "Brushstrokes"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on September 15, 2011

    Clever – the story an the thief’s excuse.

  2. The following was written by Frankie on September 15, 2011

    The language places me in another century. I like that.

  3. The following was written by Tim Sevenhuysen on September 15, 2011

    Glad you guys liked it! This was a tough one to pare down, to fit in all the details and really make each word do extra work. I think it turned out to communicate what I wanted it to, though, and I’m pleased with it and really glad to see it here.

  4. The following was written by Von on September 17, 2011

    I LOVED this one. Very funny. Great language and tone.