A story from Thursday, October 4, 2012

At the Playground

Father watches daughter run, jump, swing, laugh, spin, dance, climb. Tell her now? No. He treasures her last minutes of innocent bliss.

3 Critiques to "At the Playground"

  1. The following was written by Jan Brown on October 4, 2012

    Poignant. The story implies a pending divorce, but it could be some other bad news. Evokes feelings of empathy and anticipation. Very effective. Well done!

  2. The following was written by Victoria on October 4, 2012

    Oh dear! What will he tell her? A cliff-hangar! Well written!

  3. The following was written by E A M Harris on November 3, 2012

    I really liked this. It leaves so many things unanswered but is also complete.