Father watches daughter run, jump, swing, laugh, spin, dance, climb. Tell her now? No. He treasures her last minutes of innocent bliss.
Poignant. The story implies a pending divorce, but it could be some other bad news. Evokes feelings of empathy and anticipation. Very effective. Well done!
Oh dear! What will he tell her? A cliff-hangar! Well written!
I really liked this. It leaves so many things unanswered but is also complete.