Zombie Love

Although his heart had been rotting, he loved her madly. She bent to kiss his long gone lips and he pulled her in close, feeling her spleen.

3 Critiques to "Zombie Love"

  1. Ronald Dean Rellinger's critique:

    As he returned her kiss, her decaying jaw dropped to the floor. He watched in awe at the sight. Even in death, she continued to nag.

  2. Jan B.'s critique:

    Great zombie story. Also like Ronald’s response!

  3. Charlotte West's critique:

    Both the story and the reply made me laugh! Great job!

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