A story from Friday, August 26, 2011

Yet Again

I lay on the sonogram table, holding my breath. Ten long weeks, over. My world collapses at four simple words. “No fetal heart tone.”

4 Critiques to "Yet Again"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on August 26, 2011

    Heartbreaking….

  2. The following was written by Tim Sevenhuysen on August 26, 2011

    Aaawww!!

  3. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on August 26, 2011

    A well written story; a good set up and a powerful ending.

  4. The following was written by G. K. Adams on August 27, 2011

    Poignant yet powerful. The title tells a greater tragedy. Well done.