A story from Monday, November 28, 2011

Wild Things

In the grass and trees and streams live all the little wild things I love so much. I hold very still – they do not know I am not a mountain.

5 Critiques to "Wild Things"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on November 28, 2011

    I love this! I have often thought of what an ant must think of a person walking by. Nice to see this put into such wonderful words.

  2. The following was written by Sharanya on November 28, 2011

    Beautiful!

  3. The following was written by Maya on November 28, 2011

    You have beautifully captured the indifference of the nature.

  4. The following was written by B Trinkle on December 1, 2011

    This reads quite a lot like a poem. Lovely.

  5. The following was written by Rob Craig on December 3, 2011

    Thanks for all the kind words – it’s greatly appreciated.

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