A story from Wednesday, March 9, 2011

What a Wonderful World!

The streets were brimming with people. Suddenly, a bizarre blackout left everyone stranded. They say that the blind led everyone home.

5 Critiques to "What a Wonderful World!"

  1. The following was written by Tucker on March 9, 2011


  2. The following was written by Rick Drescher on March 9, 2011

    I like it. One of the best, ‘hit the subject right on the head’, 140 fiction’s yet.

  3. The following was written by Gayle beveridge on March 10, 2011

    Beautifully written; the first sentence sets the scene, the second plays out the crisis and the third, a perfect resolution. Also a very valid comment of what we take for granted and the consequences of that.

  4. The following was written by Asha on March 10, 2011

    Thank you:)

  5. The following was written by Andres Reyes on March 21, 2011

    It’s amazing how people can whip something up so crafty by being limited to 140 characters. Whoever said that there are limitations of the imagination was clearly bullshitting. Well done. :)