A story from Wednesday, May 9, 2012

Weightless

You look great! Not that I minded the extra weight. But now, so slim. So beautiful. Don’t you just wish you could stay on the chemo forever?

3 Critiques to "Weightless"

  1. The following was written by Kelly Martin on May 9, 2012

    Wow! That was a terrific story! Makes you think.

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on May 9, 2012

    Well written, your character so likable in the beginning is revealed as shallow and uncaring by the end.

  3. The following was written by Laura Simon on May 10, 2012

    I love this story. It is creative and thought provoking. There can be a downside to thin and it is not pretty.