A story from Thursday, January 19, 2012

Ways to Forget

He repeated his name for her, but she simply stared ahead, motionless. He watched their past disintegrate behind her eyes.

4 Critiques to "Ways to Forget"

  1. The following was written by Alex Bowyer on February 2, 2012

    A great little piece! Interestingly I misread it as “he repeated her name” and it completely changes the story, it
    could then be about separation, the end of something that was, rather than the end of something that never will be.
    Either way, it really made me stop and think…

  2. The following was written by KateArletta on March 6, 2012

    I did the same as the first reviewer. Both readings work–but I kind of like the way “He repeated her name…” made me think of separation. Good story–maybe you could publish the sequel.

  3. The following was written by katie on November 4, 2012

    reminded me of the notebook! sad.

  4. The following was written by Rosanyi Rivera on January 31, 2013

    It is very sad to see a loved one not remember who you are. Especially when you shared all sorts of precious moments!!!

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