A story from Monday, February 6, 2012

Waiting for the gun

There was no escape. She gazed ahead, ready for the gun to trigger her fate. As it fired, she heaved the oars back and took the first stroke.

4 Critiques to "Waiting for the gun"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on February 6, 2012

    Well written; I was expecting an entirely different ending.

  2. The following was written by Jan B. on February 7, 2012

    This is a great story with a wonderful twist!

  3. The following was written by Arshad on March 4, 2012

    Nicely woven.

  4. The following was written by Chase Baroody on January 31, 2013

    Not what i was expecting! Was thinking marathon race.