A story from Thursday, November 10, 2011

Visiting Hours

She could see the pain in his eyes. It was her fault he was in here. There would always be more than bullet proof glass between them.

3 Critiques to "Visiting Hours"

  1. The following was written by Heather on November 12, 2011

    makes me wonder what she did to put him in jail – very good 😀

  2. The following was written by Pauline on November 14, 2011

    Leaves the reader wondering but I wonder why he’s in jail rather than what she did to put him there. Did it have something to do with the divide between them?

  3. The following was written by Sydney on November 21, 2011

    Really interesting!!