A story from Thursday, June 21, 2012

Visceral Woes

They thought congratulations were in order. Seeing their mischievous grins, she sucked her belly in and decided to join the gym after all.

5 Critiques to "Visceral Woes"

  1. The following was written by dpcinh on June 21, 2012

    I’ve a gut feeling, this anecdote has autobiographical connotations

  2. The following was written by Atul on June 21, 2012

    Awesome! Nice story :)

  3. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on June 21, 2012

    A funny story of the unintended consequences of weight gain.

  4. The following was written by Atul Sinha on June 21, 2012

    Brilliant! I wonder how many times i’ve told someone something that i thought was a compliment…but actually it was quite the opposite!

  5. The following was written by su on June 22, 2012

    thank you all. yes…it’s a true story :)