A story from Friday, April 12, 2013


No one saw Teddy take the money from the unlocked safe, but afterward, he felt guilty; preached a Wednesday night sermon on forgiveness.

2 Critiques to "Vegas"

  1. The following was written by Wanda Kiernan on April 12, 2013

    Rationalizing theft with a sermon on forgiveness. Very nice. I wonder if the protagonist decided to return the money?

  2. The following was written by Erin Cole on April 15, 2013

    Great dissonance of character. Forgiveness might depend on what he’ll spend the money on…
    Nice one, Angel.