Tim parked the van next to the federal building. He stared at the glass doors in disgust. He exited the van, slamming the door with a BANG!
Good use of the door slam to introduce the explosion.
Unfortunately, this is non-fiction. Timothy McVeigh’s truck bomb killed or injured nearly one thousand people in the federal building. With the anniversary of his execution approaching, it seems distateful to publish a microstory glorifying this event, which tragically affected the lives of so many people.