A story from Friday, June 1, 2012

Van

Tim parked the van next to the federal building. He stared at the glass doors in disgust. He exited the van, slamming the door with a BANG!

2 Critiques to "Van"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on June 1, 2012

    Good use of the door slam to introduce the explosion.

  2. The following was written by Jan B. on June 6, 2012

    Unfortunately, this is non-fiction. Timothy McVeigh’s truck bomb killed or injured nearly one thousand people in the federal building. With the anniversary of his execution approaching, it seems distateful to publish a microstory glorifying this event, which tragically affected the lives of so many people.