A story from Friday, February 1, 2013

Unrequited

For a moment I was 21. Then he looked away. I was back at a bar I didn’t know in a city I never liked. The inches between us became miles.

3 Critiques to "Unrequited"

  1. The following was written by E A M Harris on February 2, 2013

    Memory plays tricks on us. I like how you show this.

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on February 4, 2013

    How tragic – a poignant story.

  3. The following was written by Mark Connors on February 8, 2013

    Stunning. Just stunning!