A story from Friday, March 25, 2011

Unforgettable Delores

For years, she had dreamed of a memorable spring break. The day she walked out in a bikini, it was indeed, memorable. She was sixty-seven.

7 Critiques to "Unforgettable Delores"

  1. The following was written by April on March 25, 2011

    That’s so cute. It would probably take me that long to work up the courage too 😉

  2. The following was written by Martha on March 25, 2011

    I love old ladies who still have vigour, I hope her bikini was purple and she was still wearing a grannie hat

  3. The following was written by joy on March 25, 2011

    I’m sure there’s a Delores out there, rockin’ a purple bikini and awesome granny hat. And lookin’ and feelin’ real good!

  4. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on March 26, 2011

    Well written, the end took me by surprise.

  5. The following was written by Charlene Hardin on March 27, 2011

    Perfect :)

  6. The following was written by C.E. Hyun on March 29, 2011

    Aww, love it!

  7. The following was written by Rachel Beckett on March 30, 2011

    Loved your story. It reminded by of ‘Flowers for Mrs Harris’ – a touching and poignant tale by Paul Gallico.

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