She’s gone bad. Little liar. Got a spoiled milk mind. Smell the sour? You better throw her out before she makes them other kids sick.
Ha! Love this! Great use of ‘voice.’
This makes me wonder what a spoiled milk mind thinks…perhaps a rebuttal for your next One Forty story? Great job, Madeline!
“Smell the sour?” I sho do — and it’s got nothin’ to do with the writin’. Nicely done.
Thank you all very much!
Stacy, I don’t think I want to know what a spoiled milk mind thinks. Although, maybe I already know since I came up with the story…Hmm…
“Smell the sour.” Love it.