A story from Tuesday, May 31, 2011

Uncle Bo Blames The Girl

She’s gone bad. Little liar. Got a spoiled milk mind. Smell the sour? You better throw her out before she makes them other kids sick.

5 Critiques to "Uncle Bo Blames The Girl"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on May 31, 2011

    Ha! Love this! Great use of ‘voice.’

  2. The following was written by Stacy Post on May 31, 2011

    This makes me wonder what a spoiled milk mind thinks…perhaps a rebuttal for your next One Forty story? Great job, Madeline!

  3. The following was written by Milo James Fowler on May 31, 2011

    “Smell the sour?” I sho do — and it’s got nothin’ to do with the writin’. Nicely done.

  4. The following was written by Madeline Mora-Summonte on June 1, 2011

    Thank you all very much!

    Stacy, I don’t think I want to know what a spoiled milk mind thinks. Although, maybe I already know since I came up with the story…Hmm…

  5. The following was written by Rob on July 6, 2011

    “Smell the sour.” Love it.