A story from Wednesday, February 27, 2013

Two Dead in Black Lake

Two lovers in a rowboat. My wife and her assistant. Their lake is oil dark, still, but dangerous. Like me.

5 Critiques to "Two Dead in Black Lake"

  1. The following was written by @biscottidana on February 27, 2013

    Creepy. And it lingers long after the read. Well done, Dean!

  2. The following was written by Dean Edwards on February 27, 2013

    That’s great. Thanks for the input Dana. D

  3. The following was written by Dubhain on February 27, 2013

    Awesome. Creepy, sleek and poetic.

  4. The following was written by Marianne on February 28, 2013

    Fantastic story. So many layers…it’s so still and yet I can hear the splashes!

  5. The following was written by Paolo Jose Cruz on June 20, 2013

    The moody, atmospheric quality of crime noir lends itself quite easily to microfiction. This piece is a fine example of that — and quite literally, too, in the case of the lake itself.