Two lovers in a rowboat. My wife and her assistant. Their lake is oil dark, still, but dangerous. Like me.
Creepy. And it lingers long after the read. Well done, Dean!
That’s great. Thanks for the input Dana. D
Awesome. Creepy, sleek and poetic.
Fantastic story. So many layers…it’s so still and yet I can hear the splashes!
The moody, atmospheric quality of crime noir lends itself quite easily to microfiction. This piece is a fine example of that — and quite literally, too, in the case of the lake itself.