A story from Friday, March 9, 2012

Two Blue Lines

He thought they were soul mates, until the day she lifted her head from the toilet to answer his hesitant, hopeful question: “I hope not.”

3 Critiques to "Two Blue Lines"

  1. The following was written by Jan B. on March 10, 2012

    Oh, a rude awakening! But a sweetly surprising story. Very well done!

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on March 11, 2012

    This story packs and emotional punch, it has it all – joy, apprehension, disappointment. Well written.

  3. The following was written by Love The Bad Guy on February 13, 2013

    Thank you very much.