A story from Tuesday, June 26, 2012

‘Til Death

“Trust this only,” she growled in my ear. “I’ll come back for you.” I shuddered as I pulled the knife from her spine and let her drop.

6 Critiques to "‘Til Death"

  1. The following was written by Ines Franco Fatzinger on June 27, 2012

    Ooooo…love this. Revenge from the other side – very creepy and good foreshadowing. Great writing!

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on June 27, 2012

    I love the voice of this piece and the dialogue, “Trust this only” sets it up beautifully.

  3. The following was written by Love The Bad Guy on June 27, 2012

    Thank you very much for taking the time to comment. :)

  4. The following was written by Donna Marie on July 3, 2012

    I love this!

  5. The following was written by Love The Bad Guy on February 13, 2013

    Thank you, Donna.

  6. The following was written by Vasu Gangapalli on May 8, 2013

    It was really great!

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