A story from Friday, October 22, 2010

Ties That Bind

He sat by the tree where he’d carved their names six years ago. Broken promises drove them apart. A child held them together forever.

3 Critiques to "Ties That Bind"

  1. The following was written by Joy on October 22, 2010

    This says so much in so few words. A good mark of a great writer! :) I really enjoyed this story.

  2. The following was written by Mike on October 22, 2010

    Ouch! Very weighty. Well done!

  3. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on October 23, 2010

    Wow! A relationship, a child to mark it and a betrayal all in 140 characters. Well done.