A story from Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Three Way

“Go ahead,” Marcie whispered. Ben watched Sheila blush. The two women waited. “And take off the ring, Ben. I’ve been dead a long time.”

3 Critiques to "Three Way"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on September 14, 2011

    A clever bad sad story of grief. Well presented.

  2. The following was written by Kim Tatam on September 15, 2011

    Clever. This is about the only kind of three-way most husbands can expect to get! I found this touching but at the same time humorous because the title set up such a different expectation. Great job.

  3. The following was written by Ib Lucas on October 17, 2011

    What a deep and touching story! A masterpiece!

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