A story from Thursday, November 17, 2011

The Wandering Cloud

And the Cloud soared playfully higher, but the cold became unbearable. It’s not fair, thought the Cloud. I am going to cry.

2 Critiques to "The Wandering Cloud"

  1. The following was written by Maya on November 17, 2011

    Wonderful personification.

  2. The following was written by Amy Tripp on November 17, 2011

    Aww. So sweet. And that’s where rain comes from. Nice job!