A story from Wednesday, February 29, 2012

The Thirst

Unquenchable thirst. Reaching, reaching…The vessel shattered. Street ran red. Sons and daughters wailed. Mr. Kool-Aid had left no will.

3 Critiques to "The Thirst"

  1. The following was written by Jan B. on February 29, 2012

    This is very well-written, very humorous! And now I am thirsty….

    • The following was written by Charlotte West on March 1, 2012

      Thank you for your great critique! Have a long, cool drink and a great day!

  2. The following was written by Bill B. on March 14, 2012

    This was very funny. I enjoyed it.