A story from Tuesday, August 10, 2010

The stuff of dreams

When it rains like this the gutter is full of stardust. Adults don’t notice it but children put it in their pockets to dream about at night.

4 Critiques to "The stuff of dreams"

  1. The following was written by S. May on August 11, 2010

    Cath,
    Great 140! It has a nice rhythm to it. I read it a couple of times.

  2. The following was written by Jen on August 11, 2010

    It does read like a poem and conjures up images of sandmen and dreams. I love it!

    • The following was written by Rod Drake on August 12, 2010

      Nicely put together, doesn’t feel rushed or too short; a sweet little glimpse at an alternate reality.

  3. The following was written by Stephen V. Ramey on August 16, 2010

    I enjoyed this. Nicely done.