When it rains like this the gutter is full of stardust. Adults don’t notice it but children put it in their pockets to dream about at night.
Great 140! It has a nice rhythm to it. I read it a couple of times.
It does read like a poem and conjures up images of sandmen and dreams. I love it!
Nicely put together, doesn’t feel rushed or too short; a sweet little glimpse at an alternate reality.
I enjoyed this. Nicely done.