The Search

He walked the streets showing her photo. At every corner he imagined her voice calling, “Daddy.” At every turn he shed another tear.

One Critique of "The Search"

  1. redsaid1's critique:

    And you accused me of making YOU all emotional just a few days ago! Very well done, Gayle.

    This critique was added on October 8, 2010 at 7:27 pm
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