A story from Thursday, January 12, 2012

The Philanderer

He played his hand early. Sliding his slender fingers up her skirt as she purred. It was only then that he realized she was actually a he.

2 Critiques to "The Philanderer"

  1. The following was written by Alex Bowyer on February 1, 2012

    I love the idea, but I find the second sentence too direct… Needs a bit more show but don’t tell IMHO. Perhaps he feels something that suggests she’s a he, rather than saying it directly…

  2. The following was written by Victoria on April 30, 2012