A story from Thursday, April 26, 2012

The mariner’s dog

She stares into the sea. She spots a speck and hopes it’s him. They shake their heads and walk by. She’s been here for ten years now.

3 Critiques to "The mariner’s dog"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on April 26, 2012

    So sad.

  2. The following was written by Victoria on April 26, 2012

    So sad – nice job invoking emotion in such a short story!!

  3. The following was written by Mary Soufi on April 30, 2012

    Well done. Read it again, just because its so good–like a good song.

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