A story from Thursday, September 29, 2011

The Lovers

When winter comes, the pigeons have gone and only one lover sits. The park is gloomy, the trees are bare — as empty as his heart without her.

2 Critiques to "The Lovers"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on September 29, 2011

    Great imagery. You bring us right into the gloom. Well done!

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on September 29, 2011

    A good use of the season to illustrate his mood.