A story from Wednesday, June 29, 2011

The Last Goodbye

She looked back with pity as she left our bed; it had happened to me again. Even ex-girlfriends prefer to end with a bang not a whimper.

3 Critiques to "The Last Goodbye"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on June 30, 2011

    LOL! But Ouch! Good job!

  2. The following was written by John Tansey on July 16, 2011

    A bang is better than an unanswered phone call. Nice. Sharp.

  3. The following was written by L. M. | Chaotically Yours on January 8, 2013

    Short and sharp. Nicely done.