A story from Thursday, May 16, 2013

The Inevitable

Yu dangles the worm near her lips, tongues the air. The other kids dare her to eat it. She does. One day soon, the worms will get to eat Yu.

One Critique of "The Inevitable"

  1. The following was written by Erin Cole on May 17, 2013

    That first sentence is such a great setup, and I loved the paradox at the end. Nice work, Angel.

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