A story from Thursday, June 2, 2011

The great brain robbery

Each day memories were missing. None were recovered. He penned his wishes before they, too, vanished. The thief was known; but never caught.

5 Critiques to "The great brain robbery"

  1. The following was written by Maya on June 2, 2011

    very clever. Nicely done.

  2. The following was written by Jan B. on June 2, 2011

    Outstanding.

  3. The following was written by Amy Tripp on June 2, 2011

    Great job! I can’t imagine what it’s like to have alzheimers or dementia, especially if you realize just what you’re losing.

  4. The following was written by Kim Tatam on June 2, 2011

    Wow, very moving. Clever title.

  5. The following was written by Madeline Mora-Summonte on June 3, 2011

    Love this, especially the last line. Stunning.