A story from Friday, June 17, 2011

The First Response

Before leaving for work, he caresses his newborn who suddenly holds his finger in a tiny hand. He’s touched & helpless. Meeting is postponed.

4 Critiques to "The First Response"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on June 17, 2011

    Very sweet! Those are the moments that are so precious. Wonderful.

  2. The following was written by Tucker on June 17, 2011

    Oh man, this is so lovely. Beautifully described, thoughtfully composed.

  3. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on June 17, 2011

    Bravo Pushkal, what a lovely story.

  4. The following was written by Fritz Heinzen on June 21, 2011

    Gets right to the heart of what really matters. If more of this happened, less of the previous story would happen.