A story from Friday, May 13, 2011

The Dark Side

Butchered by a drunk, two teenage ghosts are seen trying to thumb a ride home. Mom sits by the window and waits. The milk has spoiled!

2 Critiques to "The Dark Side"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on May 13, 2011

    It’s funny how, in tragedy, sometimes we think of the most mundane things. Nicely done.

  2. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on May 14, 2011

    You have very successfully captured this mother’s sadness.