A story from Thursday, December 2, 2010

The Challenge

“The challenge,” the old woman whispered, “is to never stop creating yourself.” Silver hair, pale skin became golden feathers—she flew away.

4 Critiques to "The Challenge"

  1. The following was written by Maya on December 2, 2010

    WordWhispers, what a great whisper of hope.

  2. The following was written by EC Sheedy on December 2, 2010

    Was delighted to discover golden feathers are in my (near) future. I’d thought more darkly than this.

  3. The following was written by Elroy Tate on December 2, 2010

    Beautiful.

  4. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on December 2, 2010

    Sage advice and a brilliant metaphor for a better life.