A story from Friday, September 2, 2011

The Break Up

Glass splintered into sparkling pieces on the floor. Her bare feet didn’t waver. She crossed, walking out the door. He swept, not looking up.

2 Critiques to "The Break Up"

  1. The following was written by Sharanya on September 2, 2011

    Perfectly done.

  2. The following was written by Amy Tripp on September 2, 2011

    I love your portrayals: Her strength, his lonliness. Great job!