A story from Wednesday, August 4, 2010

The Blue Collar Deity

The new roof on the fish shack was complete. He stood back admiring his work. Slowly he grew old and vanished. Only the building remains.

2 Critiques to "The Blue Collar Deity"

  1. The following was written by dana on August 4, 2010

    Well done. I like the timeline in this piece.

  2. The following was written by Mike on August 9, 2010

    Super nice, really well done. Where I grew up there are all these falling down fish shacks, the only thing left from the hard men of the sea.