A story from Monday, October 31, 2011

The Attack

The knife plunged deeply into flesh, slicing & tearing. Looking upon his victim with satisfaction, Billy then turned to the next pumpkin…

4 Critiques to "The Attack"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on October 31, 2011

    LOL! I love the slasher feel to the pumpking carving moment! Well done. Happy Halloween!

  2. The following was written by Jan B. on October 31, 2011

    This is a great story with a neat twist! Makes me smile.

  3. The following was written by Sam Webb on October 31, 2011

    Oh that was so perfect!

  4. The following was written by Matt on November 1, 2011

    TY, all! I like twists, so I’m glad this worked for you.

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