A story from Thursday, July 28, 2011

Talking to myself

Approaching the sad girl on the playground, I looked at me. “Every year is better than the last.” And then I returned to the time machine.

5 Critiques to "Talking to myself"

  1. The following was written by Amy Tripp on July 28, 2011

    This really hit my heart. There are so many children who need to hear just that message. Bravo on the twist that gave the girl a chance to comfort herself.

  2. The following was written by Tony Brown on July 28, 2011

    No matter how bleak it might seem at certain times, there’s always hope for a better tomorrow. Good tale!

  3. The following was written by Tucker on July 28, 2011

    This is really great! For some reason, I’m finding that a lot of 140 character fiction pieces handle time travel with great depth and creativity. Loved this.

  4. The following was written by SLMyshell on July 28, 2011

    What a great story. I think that I’m going to look onto right now as if I was in the future, past everything that is too important in the present, and approach my problem solving from that level. Thank you for that revelation @Sekelsky

  5. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on July 28, 2011

    A very touching story and a wonderful concept.

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