A story from Monday, July 23, 2012

Tahiti

Vacation time, but money is short. Set the lawn chair in kid’s sandbox, grab sunglasses and a beer. Ignore wife-kids-phone. I’m in Tahiti.

2 Critiques to "Tahiti"

  1. The following was written by Gayle Beveridge on July 24, 2012

    I love the upbeat tone of this story, but stumbled on the syntax.

  2. The following was written by Debbi Antebi on August 8, 2012

    Vacation is a state of mind… Love this piece!